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FINISHED PAGE ONE!!! eh not much but its a start. ^^;

took me forever cuz i got carried away with the toning XD now im burnt XP i got lazy on the last panel cuz i wasnt sure on how much detail i should put into it, cuz i didn't know how much would show on here.

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hey, this is looking pretty good. It's got a lot of factors which make it a good first page, the first panel and the ones on the right which set the scene, and a nice full body shot of what probably would be the main, or one of the main characters. I think that your panel lines should be a bit thicker, just to more clearly separate them, and I think the guy's torso and shoulders look good, and his legs by themselves are nice, but I think that after the ribcage his abdomen tapers a bit too much, leaving his midsection/hips a bit skinny. I like the last panel there, I think it does well in looking interesting and exciting enough for me to want to turn the page and learn more. Good job :3 looks like it will be a fun read!
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